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One drop,
for when your granddad died.

One drop,
for when your when your parents parted ways.

One drop,
for when your friend let you down.

One drop,
for every night alone.

Tears or rain,
the pain stays the same.
But someone else cries with you,....
....the One who cried the rain.
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Inspired by my brother.

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:iconkliban-katz:
This is a wonderful poem. :heart: I love the repeated phrase and the sense of never being alone created with the final stanza.

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鰤子 しましょう!

integrity.love.ambition.prosperity
茶くん♥

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It's beautiful! *sniffles*

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I don't sneeze, I spaz with sound effects.

I smile because I know that no matter what each day brings, there will always be sunshine, even if it is hidden behind dark clouds.
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wow very surprise ending.
:iconchantelrenee:
I love this poem, especially the ending. Gives me a whole new perspective on the rain. I do admit at first though, I thought the drops stood for consuming alcohol, lol.
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Welcome!

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I don't sneeze, I spaz with sound effects.

I smile because I know that no matter what each day brings, there will always be sunshine, even if it is hidden behind dark clouds.

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